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Unread 04-04-2009, 02:35 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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I agree with the others who think "replace the past" sounds wrong. I could see "revise, rework, replay, reboot" as possibilities. There is a slice-of-life quality to this, and I enjoy its wordplay, wistfulness, and hint of self-satire, but in some ways it does seem to be running in place.

Susan
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