Mike,
Where did you get your text of the Clough? It is not at all the standard version. Cf., for example,
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-latest-decalogue/
or The Oxford Book of English Verse, which has 4 additional lines at the end, picked up from a later-found manuscript of the poem. In any event, yours varies from the version I know in almost every line. Can you point me at a text of yours?
Thanks.
RHE