Thanks for the replies.
Chris I thought that the opening unevenness reflected the disorder of the mind yearning for the peace of the place. Though somewhere there is an added profundity to the statement (I guess that's where the poetry comes in)
I never thought of the sexy angle, though I you'd think with ESVM it can't be far away.
Thanks for posting the poem and translation Janet. Its a hell of poem.
Despite what defects people find of redundancy and over the top diction in her poems I find (specially in her later poems)such authority.
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