Thread: Ragged Island EsV Millay
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Unread 08-30-2007, 05:03 PM
Janet Kenny Janet Kenny is offline
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Chris,
I'll get back to Millay ASAP but regarding Wilbur's translation, YES! That "quietness" has the two syllables of "calme" and pauses the poem in just the right way. The rest is very fine as well.
Janet
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