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Unread 12-12-2007, 05:36 PM
Mark Allinson Mark Allinson is offline
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Nothing would sleep in that cellar, dank as a ditch,
Bulbs broke out of boxes hunting for chinks in the dark,
Shoots dangled and drooped,
Lolling obscenely from mildewed crates,

We shouldn't overlook the role played by sound-patterns in generating meaning. The predominating "duh" and "buh" sounds contribute to the tone of fascinated revulsion.
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