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Originally Posted by Janice D. Soderling
Cross-posted with Orwn.
Marion, thank you for your encouragement. I can always count on you to recognize when a bad poem is good. Why did that fun thread have to end?
Michael. I'm Janice. You usually say such smart things, and I usually understand immediately how smart they are, so I am perplexed why I don't get the wisdom of what you are saying now. Besides which I am not very good at math and I am wondering which Moderator Designate is going to keep track of eligibility and infractions. But don't let me discourage you, on second thought, do let me discourage you.
Skip. Good thinking and I will keep Dream at Daybreak in mind as an alternative title (or possibly Daybreak Dream, or Dreamday Break.
Actually I was thinking about calling it Flarf Barf.
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Come on, let's work on it:
Workshop poets spurn the bums' mattresses
Outside, passenger planes again disgorge
the trapped of bad mood, hog-sounds,
read-wroth:
God, what an airy translator
with her empty doggerel stunt,
comes over like eye-dreck refuse
written in surly-skewed letters,
that the fans feel her anguish in kind.
let's drown the old bore,
or gang-haul through window:
grant light from darkness