This is a good poem, but I wouldn't call it a great poem by any means. The rhymes are simplistic as is the message. The repeating phrases are a little boring and not all that effective. All in all a good poem in my humble opinion.
p.s. After reading Richard's comments I searched the poem on google. The variations in content and punctuation are really astounding.
[This message has been edited by Roy Hamilton (edited June 17, 2008).]
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