Thread: Light Verse 3: Where are the Negligees of Anthony
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Unread 09-02-2009, 10:23 AM
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This could be breezier (nice poetic term) if it were all tetrameter. Of course, so would "Loving in Truth and fain in verse my love to show" if its seams were just taken in a bit.
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