Thread: Light Verse 12: Why You Can't Go Home Again
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Unread 09-05-2009, 09:54 AM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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The prosody in this one is fine, but it doesn't amuse me. Too many of the elements are clichéd, too few surprising.

Susan
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