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Unread 10-18-2009, 02:43 PM
Orwn Acra Orwn Acra is offline
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Since we're talking about unusual rhyme, could someone please explain to me how you would notate the rhyme scheme of this inappropriate Gavin Ewart poem?

a Person is Accidentally Rejuvenated in Old Age

When a cat flea bit my scrotum
my cock shot up like a totem pole;
I was near death's dark portal,
but that flea roused my immortal soul!

And I had no heart to kill it,
it restored my lost virility!
It's a fact, to be quite truthful,
I was born again! A youthful me!

Spirits of delight come rarely,
things like that are always fairly few;
angels in the world of men, they
cause ecstatic feelings when they do!

Would it be AABCCB each stanza?
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