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Originally Posted by Chris Childers
Maryann, I think you've totally missed what Ewart is doing. "Scrotum" rhymes with "totem" in the next line, "portal" with "immortal," etc..
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Ack. Yup. Thanks. But as for notating this, I've never heard of any system for notating rhymes that were not
end rhymes. Has anyone?
And a later thought: I'm not persuaded that Orwn's method of notation works for the scheme in question. I look at it and think it must indicate a six-line stanza in which the ends of the first and second, fourth and fifth, and third and sixth lines are rhymed.