Super title. I'd like to read a subtle play on "May" there -- "may" also signifying the possible, but unknown. Your detail (
deal your Mass card solitaire, etc.) adds so much, in my reading, to texture and import, depth. All the alliteration of S2 I think is splendid, and what beautiful symbolism there -- the gold (value, worth, meaning) with rust (tarnish, decay). So much so, the insertion of the plate tectonics is something of a letdown, a red herring, if you will, coming across as arbitrary.
The exclamation of S4 is a welcome diversion from all the direct "I's" and "you's." I loved the simile of weekend traffic, along with your great "cr" sounds, following. Nice launch of the image with sound.
For me, this one ends in an irresistible negative capability.