1. "Seed swallowed digging in the dung" grants immunity from fear?
Apart from the coarse suggestiveness, the thought makes no sense.
2. We assume the time to render it faint. If "it" means death, how does one "render" death? And how can time be "faint?"
3. The childhood preparation for death should offer a poignant backdrop to
the author's more mature thoughts;instead, I can't tell what is going on the in the last lines. I hope the author was so engrossed in the writing he/she didn't catch the distasteful implication of the last line.
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