I am intrigued by how the cold delivery system here--very much in keeping with a description of the mobius strip or an Escher drawing--conveys the warmth of interaction even as the poet instructs us and asks us to analyze. I should freaking hate this, but I don't because it works really well. It works better than any Escher drawing, which might intrigue, but leaves us ice cold, out of the bounds of nature.
The poet keeps this in bounds. The title is great.
I like how the inversion of the central line "and disremember even your own name." jostles me.
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