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Unread 01-06-2010, 04:28 PM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
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I like how the imperative sentences instruct the reader, yet also serve to balance the romanticism. The poem is trancelike in its steady beat. The interlocking rhyme scheme is really fascinating. The last line is a wonderful echoing close, reinforcing the title. An enjoyable experience. And the tenderness in every line is evident.
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