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Unread 01-14-2010, 12:56 AM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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You're really pushing the envelope with this one! With its combination of near-rhyme, near-meter, and near-coherence, this piece challenges the traditional notions of what a poem even is.


I think this would work better for me in performance than on the page. (Let's see, your hometown is...) Yep, I'm sure I'd like this better if you made it a performance piece.


Wow! This is BY FAR the best poem I've ever seen from you!
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