Ok, my very dear friend John,
I hope you won't think I'm being hypercritical but only the last line is actually singing the praises of insomnia. I think it calls for much more of a 'Whoopeee, I can't sleep!' sort of thing - but it's early days yet; look how 'New word order' first started, compared with how it ended when we'd all got the hang of what was actually called for.
You always kick-start it for us, which is great, but I'm sure you can improve on this. That's my initial response, anyway. Onwards and upwards!
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