Thread: Short Poem 1: station
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Unread 03-02-2010, 08:26 AM
Andrew Frisardi Andrew Frisardi is offline
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My favorite so far, though I'm not crazy about "endowed" and "describe," as they seem discordant word choices for the poem. I think the poem would be even stronger without lines 2 and 4.
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