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Originally Posted by Martin Elster
Marion,
Your poem is definitely a winner.
But in these lines
while tossing on those restless seas,
you might create a masterpiece
I don't hear "seas/masterpiece" rhyming. The first ends with "eez" and the second with "ees." It would be like trying to rhyme "spouses" with "houses." They don't.
Martin
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Martin,
You don't know how I struggled to come up with the "seas/masterpiece" rhyme!! I'm going to go with John's assessment and hope Lucy agrees.
Jerome,
Aren't kippers a kind of fish?
Must confess total ignorance on 'kip' or 'to kip'.
Jayne,
How about a song that goes:
"You say zee,
and I say zed..."