Jim, I ought to have said that I love your poem. Would it be rude to suggest that the antepenultimate line has one more syllable than it can comfortably manage with?
Gregory, I love 'the cesspit' and shall endeavour to introduce it among my acquaintance. I hope you know the Scottish 'kludgie' which is pleasantly onomatop... oh how te hell do you spell it?
Ann, you speak, as ever, in divine poesie.
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