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Unread 09-16-2010, 11:14 AM
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Susan, I have altered the line, stealing from Kingsley Amis as I go. As for kludgies, well here is an alternative couplet if the word really is too regional:

Blood on the carpet, vomit in the loo,
The corpse of Auntie Edna's cockatoo,

I am sorry to lose the dead budgie, however.
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