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Unread 12-03-2010, 04:58 PM
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Dave,

Brilliant.

Can you just tidy it up a bit, though? 'invite' (verb) instead of 'invitation' (noun) is a bugbear of mine; Strictly Come Dancing with capitals and in italics; start no.9 with a capital W. 'botox' might need a capital B as well but I'm not certain (is it a brand name?). Do 5,9 and 10 need to start with 'To', like the rest?

Just nit-picking, but it's well worth setting it out right on the page IMO.
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