Martin, in the light of your earlier post, I approach critting this with some trepidation, unsure whether it's a genuine entry posted in the spirit of the thread, or whether it's simply intended as support material for that earlier post. Whatever, it is clever humour, with a crack-up close. If you aren't interested in crit, don't read below the line.
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If you're still with me, I can find little to crit other than the triple redundancy of " minor small changes and tweaks." If ever this thread is used for its intended purpose, Brenda and Prue may chime in with something more profound, but in any case, I would suggest you don't enter it. Give the rest of us a greater chance at the big money.
Peter
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