Norman,
This really needs to be a poem. I was tempted to write "your mini-essay sucks" for the same reason I suspect that Michael was -- so I could add a "that said." However, that said, I haven't seen a lot of crappy poems about sexual deviance, not on the Sphere, anyway, although perhaps that just means I should get out more, or raise my standards.
Ed
PS - That said, I have always been strangely drawn to research papers that discuss insect mating rituals, in particular those of of praying mantises.
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