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Unread 02-11-2011, 12:24 PM
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Psst - Roger. This is not a worm. This is the wicked serpent tempting you to sin. Go on - take out all the odd-numbered linebreaks and see what happens...

Voilą! - couplets with internal rhymes.

I dare you.
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