Yup
I know exactly whose this is, too.
Even if the first 12 lines were no good, the closing couplet would redeem it.
Very accomplished, and takes liberties with what can be a safe form.
My fave so far.
I hope we are going to see some more liberty taking in the sonnets to come...
Philip
Last edited by Philip Quinlan; 04-16-2011 at 05:55 AM.
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