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Unread 04-16-2011, 09:27 AM
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My favorite thus far. And both the stanza enjambment before that horse-kick to the head, and the extra syllable in the final line seem vital to the heart-felt vaudeville here.

I also love the difference between sing and say in the second stanza: even the sweetest singer of love-heart things know when to say, when to call a spade a spade!

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