Thank you to everyone for so many interesting and helpful thoughts, and for liking the poem beyond all my expectations. Sorry about the various oddities of layout. A lot of brain-racking went into the punctuation, and I still have some work to do on that. Thanks Cathy for very helpful editing suggestions.
It's very reassuring that the overall outcome isn't too weird.
Sorry again for missing the main part of the event, but what a treat it's been reading all these great sonnets and comments since my return.
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