Hello to All,
If it is allowed and moderators do not mind it, I would like to submit one of my short poems. It was a little longer but I simply failed to improve upon the first two lines and friends told me to let them be during the
www.criticalpoet.com days......thanks....warmest regards/Abid
The Touch (23-12-2004)
Saying goodbye,
your hand lingers in mine
like fragrance in the air.
(I was asked to get rid of these last three lines:
Carrying your touch
I try to walk steady
but they spot it and smile.)