Michael
That's a VERY clever poem of yours. I especially like those first six lines. The only tiny thing you might consider is removing the comma at the end of L5.
Chris
I enjoyed your way of emoticonning us, particularly in the second stanza. If only I had my emoticonsciousness raised, I'd probably enjoy it even more.
Any other semicolonists out there to favor us with their renditions (or rendings) of The Great Semicolon Issue?
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