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I hope the poem as it now is meets the approval of all well-wishers.
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Oi, John! I thought we were getting 'lips' and 'fingertips' back?
I hate to say this (one of those EEK!
thingies is applicable here) but having four same-sound lines right in the middle of a poem in couplets puts me in mind of what novices do - but
you don't, so why here?