Thread: The Oldie 'Missed Appointment'
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Unread 09-29-2011, 10:13 PM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
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Susan, thanks for your thoughts on the last line. I was afraid those anapests might have bogged it down a bit, so I've amended it with your suggestion.
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