Just a little word of caution here, guys and gals - though they haven't mentioned a line limit it's 24 max. for the usual comp, so I'd advise sticking to a 4-limerick total if you're doing a 'story' version. (You might want to lose one, Sam, to be on the safe side.)
Jerome,
You made a "close textual analysis of [my] effort"... and I never felt a thing...
But I think you may be right that I was right (though I could be wrong!)