Thread: The Oldie Comp No. 144 'The End of the World'
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Unread 10-28-2011, 01:23 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is online now
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Frank, I like your poem, but the hexameter at the end is rather draggy. How about "But then, he only has to be right once."

Susan
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