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Unread 11-30-2011, 08:19 AM
Roger Slater Roger Slater is offline
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Thank you Jayne, Catherine, Lance and Susan. Here's another crack at the final stanza that works in the sheep as suggested. Improved?

The shot is lovely, lambs and sheep
Still gambol in my camera's sweep;
I promise, there's no cause to weep,
For I can crop this in my sleep.
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