Thanks, Jayne. Now if you could fix the rest of the poem, I'm in business. Here's another:
MY LOVE IS LIKE A DREAM
My love is like a gorgeous dream,
or maybe even better!
But wait! She really is a dream.
So far I have not met her.
From what I've dreamt, though, when I do,
I'm in for quite a treat.
She's beautiful, kind-hearted, fun,
romantic, sexy, sweet,
she's talented, insightful, smart,
her intellect's a doozy!
Oh how I pray that she exists
and that she's not too choosy!
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