Thread: Sonnet #8 - traveler
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Unread 04-30-2012, 09:36 AM
Pedro Poitevin Pedro Poitevin is offline
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You're probably right, Tim. Het-met would work very well, and perhaps tet alone would make the rhymes come too soon. It is a lovely sonnet. My nits are tiny. This one, I love.

Pedro.
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