I find L5 memorable as well. Being only just young enough for this to be history rather than personal experience, it is L5 that conveys to me the feeling of a shift in the order of the universe. Speaking of shifts, the perspective moves from child to adult a bit too suddenly for me in "Although I'll come to question...always brings." I would find it smoother to move the whole sentence into the adult perspective: "Although I've come to question...always brings."
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