Thread: SONNET #10 - matched
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Unread 05-01-2012, 08:40 AM
Tim Murphy Tim Murphy is offline
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Lines 2,3, and 8 all strike me as clumsy, but I agree with Shaun that the sestet is gorgeous. If this were mine, Alan would cut it to six lines!
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