Thread: The Spectator 'Jubilee Lines' by 21st May
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Unread 05-16-2012, 12:50 PM
Brian Allgar Brian Allgar is offline
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John, I don't want to upset you, but I think I actually prefer your first version, especially the ending. But then -

what the hell do I know,
said Crow.
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