John – it's within the unusually generous 20-line limit, it features a picnic & there's horror there without feeding in the clichés of ants, rain, sad sandwiches, etc. No laughs, but the rubric doesn't prescribe comedy. So yes.
Though I do think humour is your forte.
Last edited by basil ransome-davies; 08-25-2012 at 12:28 AM.
Reason: stupid mistake
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