Making it rhyme is the real killer, as I'm sure Jayne and John (and others) will agree. Try looking for a line that rhymes with 'dog' and can be fitted into the poem so that it (more or less) makes sense. Add to this the fact that I don't have any books of poetry in Paris, and had to try to find lines by means of interminable and laborious searches on the Internet ... Jayne, I think I'd almost rather pay a visit to - EEK! - the d*nt*st.
Last edited by Brian Allgar; 08-31-2012 at 07:15 AM.
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