Thanks, Graham.
I've just finished the picnic poem, which put up a bit of a fight but I hope I've got it nailed now.
Bob,
Your 'you see', I think, might just be the exception to the rule; it didn't jump out at me the way it usually does, anyway!
I've posted the half-true picnic story now. (Still haven't managed to 'crack' the NS comp yet
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Jayne