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Unread 10-24-2012, 04:36 PM
Brian Watson Brian Watson is offline
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the white sail’s shaking
a grey dawn breaking
the white clouds flying
the sea gulls crying
the long trick’s over

Though they're iambic of course by demotion, these five line endings have in common three nominally stressed syllables in a row. That's one part of the appealing rhythm, along with the already mentioned double iambs.
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