Quote:
Originally Posted by George Simmers
So learn this ancient verity
If lady you would win:
Just learn to fake sincerity -
Then boy! You're in!
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Good one, George, though I can't help feeling you've had the private detectives on my tail observing the way I live.
My only quibble is that the second line in the last stanza is short. It needs something like
So learn this ancient verity
If
lovely lady you would win:
Just learn to fake sincerity -
Then boy! You're in!
Well, "lovely " may not be the right word, but it fills the metre.