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Unread 02-15-2013, 09:05 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Frank and Chris, the "but" in my last line was partly in homage to Belloc's line, as Chris picked up, but it was also there because the crooked back is what people would expect from Shakespeare's play, but they wouldn't expect "girly" arms. I am not sure, though, that the latter reason is coming through, so I may need to change the "but" to "and" to avoid puzzling the readers.

Susan
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