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New Statesman -- food limericks -- March 7 deadline
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02-21-2013, 07:46 PM
Douglas G. Brown
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John Whitworth
Douglas, you have one extra syllable in the second line of your limerick. To my ear at least.
John, you are right. I've just blasted the superfluous "can" into oblivion.
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