Hi, all you clever bouts rimés-ers!
Here's the reply from Tessa Castro regarding variations on the words:
"Yes, that's fine as long as the rhyming element remains. The sense wasn't specified, but may and May are fine, and abstains is OK for stains. I think that Sun's instead of suns scrapes through too."
I'm SO pleased to see that Roger's "abstains" is permissible (but right from the start I said "I'm sure it will be").
There are some brilliant entries on this thread; goodness knows how you pick only four winners. Not an enviable task! (I
do hope I can report, in due course, that several Sphereans have won
)
Jayne