Bright Start
Ingenious approach, Mary. The 'wouldn't-may' combination sounds a bit rhyme-driven? How about 'It wouldn't be surprising if, this May,/he's crushed . . . ?
Then adjust 'Autumn suns', if necessary, to July or August suns?
Only one doctor runs him off to Italy, so they'll?
Maybe 'That'll . . .' ?
Good luck!
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