Martin: Thank you so much for the crits. I don't have time to work on it now. But will come back later.
As for the title, I'd like to send it in that way--they can always chop it off--unless they positively don't want one, and will chuck it in the bin unread! I know Jayne said they do publish without titles.
Jayne?? Any answers to that one?
And Martin, I can't believe you've written yet another one!!
There are SO many good ones here, I'm just sending mine in for the hell of it!
Charlotte
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